अगदी मस्त शब्दबद्ध केलीय कविता!
हेरंब, विद्याधर, मनापासून धन्यवाद! :-)
ही कविता लिहिताना तुमचं वय १४-१५ असेल तर ठीक आहे; एरवी ही निव्वळ भयानक कविता आहे.
This is not a comment about the poem, but it is feedback that I am surprised you did not publish my earlier comment. This is your blog, you are in a position to defend yourself, and yet your impulse is to block a comment when the reader finds nothing good in your poem? Actually there have been some serious travesties in some of your posts which have gone unchallenged, and I have not commented on them because the topics do not interest me. But on second thoughts, the shortcomings and illogicalities have perhaps been called out by some readers, only for them to be censored by the writer?- Naniwadekar
Mr Naniwadekar, my sincere apologies to you for not being able to publish your earlier comment due to an error message which was repeatedly blocking my attempts to publish your comment. Looks like the problem is resolved for now. So please know this that there could be N number of reasons or possibilities before you go on making such charges. If you don't like something written on my blog, please feel free not to read it anymore. I won't mind it at all.To write about your earlier comment which I could not publish, Yes, the poem was written when I was barely 16 years old. I don't write such poems anymore, because the content simply bores me. You are free to have your own opinions and comments, and if you don't find my blog satisfactory to your own set of standards, then you are perfectly free to ignore it as well... no offense! Hope you get much more nicer material to read and comment upon in future other than my blog! All the very best to you.Regards